Post by Pon-Pon on Apr 8, 2009 14:34:47 GMT -5
Welcome to the first chapter of my first .Hack//G.U fanfic! I hope I captured the characters and their personalities well. But I don’t know if I got Haseo perfect because this is supposed to be after the 3rd game has ended, which I haven’t even played or bought because most likely by the time you see this it isn’t out yet! So bear with me those of you who know and tell me where I made vital mistakes. For example as a far as I know Canard is still in Del Dona and Haseo is still the Triple Emperor.
Chapter One: Good bye Alkaid[/color]
Ryou Misaki sat in front of his computer and ran his favorite game, The World, logging in as his character Haseo. He truly didn’t have any reason to log back on. He had found tri-edge, reawakened his friend Shino and defeated Cubia. He often wondered why he still continued to log in. But the answer always came back the same, his friends.
Atoli, Silabus, Alkaid, old man Antares, Gaspard Kuhn, and Bo. Hack even Pi, Yata, Endrance, Saku and Piros 3rd had affected him in someway to make him want to continue playing.
Returning his attention to the screen he saw a flashing message saying he had new mail. He opened it to see that it read:
Hey Haseo, I have something important to tell you. Come to the root town Del Dona as soon as you get this message.
-Alkaid
Ryou could tell that something had to be wrong. Alkaid wasn’t the kind of person who didn’t tell you she was dragging you off, in her own words, super top secret training or telling you not to be late and she’d be the one who’s late.
Adorning his FMD, Face mount display(the goggles for those who don’t know), he logged into the world, feeling his conciousness slip from his world into that of The World. Upon arriving in te root town Del Dona in the form of his character Haseo he scanned the area and quickly spotted Alkaid sitting on the rock wall not far from the chaos gate.
He walked over to her side and called out her name, he didn’t receive a response. “Alkaid are you listening” he questioned. He still received no answer. Growing annoyed he drew in his breath and shouted “Alkaid stop daydreaming already!”
This time however he did get a response out of her seeing as how she let out a surprised scream as she lost her balance before falling off the wall. “You idiot! What the hell was that for” she asked as she stood hands on hips looking absolutely furious.
“If you were paying attention I wouldn’t have to yell” Haseo retorted.
“Well maybe I was trying to get my thoughts together!”
“What do you mean get your thoughts together? You told me to come meet you here because you had something important to tell me. You should already have your thoughts together!”
“Well I…Oh just never mind” she said turning away from him, arms crossed and cheeks huffed out.
Okay now he knew something was wrong now. If Alkaid didn’t wish to finish an argument, something had to wrong.
“It’s just…this is hard for me okay” she spoke in a low voice. “Can we go somewhere more…private? We’ve seemed to already caused a scene.” They surveyed the area to see that other players had either stopped to stare or was hiding behind something hoping they won’t be caught in the cross fire of the former terror of death and the former demon palace empress.
They moved from the open area of Del Dona to the home known as Canard. “Now what did you need to tell me that was so important” Haseo asked wanting to get straight to the point.
“Haseo…I’m moving” Alkaid said in a gloom filled voice.
Haseo just stared back looking annoyed “so?”
“Jeez you’re such a insensitive jerk! At least let me finish will ya! Sheesh talk about no manners.” She waited for a response but it never came. She took that as a sigh as either him being intent to listen or she had shut him up. To her it would always be the latter.
“Well like I was saying, I’m moving. Usually that would mean that I’d be logged out for a few days to a week tops. But I’m moving because of that ‘incident.’”
He knew the exact incident she was speaking of. It was when she got PKed and fell comatose.
“My parents want me to leave The World…possibly for good. They said a change of scenery would do me some good.” She turned her gaze to the ground. “So I just wanted to say good bye in case we never see each other again.”
Haseo was absolutely speechless. It was as if he was losing her all over again. He felt all of the emotions from that day flowing through him again. He had to say something. “But that doesn’t mean you have to quit, right? Once they see you’re perfectly fine you’ll be back, right?”
Alkaid forced a weak smiled. She momentarily switched of her mike so he couldn’t hear her cry. Turning her mike back on she turned to face him “you’re making this harder than I want it to be. Haseo this is…good bye.”
Alkaid motioned to leave but was stopped when Haseo grabbed her arm. “Please Alkaid you can’t just leave like this.” It seemed as if he was begging. He pulled her into a tight embrace. “Promise me. Promise me you’ll come back.”
She blushed in his arms as she held her in one world. But in the other she was tearing up and sobbing. She knew she hadn’t turned off her mike but she didn’t care. “I promise Haseo” the words flowed from her lips involuntarily. She didn’t know if they were true. But they both wished they were.
He released her knowing that if they continued any longer the pain of her departing would only hurt that much more. She turned to leave the home when a message appeared on her screen telling her said she had received an item from Haseo.
Checking her inventory she noticed she had one new item. I was a weapon, dual sword at that. But what really caught her attention was a single word in their title. That one word was honeysuckle. She turned back to him briefly “you dork” was the last thing she said. She logged out. How ever to them this log out was different then all the others. This log out felt as if Alkaid had logged off their world as friends or possibly more.
TBC
I know I’m probably going to be laughed at for saying this but writing that nearly made me cry. I also know that im not the best writter and i dont know how many of you have actually played the Trilogy the game play is kinda lame but the story is beautiful. I seriously felt she had died on me again. Well that’s enough mushy stuff. This is the narrator’s part! And remember you have to imagine awesome anime cut scenes tolling by as he talks!
Narrator: Her log out felt like she was pulled from their world once again. Multiple feeling run rampant now that they may now longer see each others face again. Can they live on? And what’s this about a new girl transferring to Ryou’s school? There is just something about her that he can’t put his finger out. Will he never figure out the identity of the girl or shall this girl fill the void in his heart. Tune in to another episode of “Meeting you on the other side!”
Chapter One: Good bye Alkaid[/color]
Ryou Misaki sat in front of his computer and ran his favorite game, The World, logging in as his character Haseo. He truly didn’t have any reason to log back on. He had found tri-edge, reawakened his friend Shino and defeated Cubia. He often wondered why he still continued to log in. But the answer always came back the same, his friends.
Atoli, Silabus, Alkaid, old man Antares, Gaspard Kuhn, and Bo. Hack even Pi, Yata, Endrance, Saku and Piros 3rd had affected him in someway to make him want to continue playing.
Returning his attention to the screen he saw a flashing message saying he had new mail. He opened it to see that it read:
Hey Haseo, I have something important to tell you. Come to the root town Del Dona as soon as you get this message.
-Alkaid
Ryou could tell that something had to be wrong. Alkaid wasn’t the kind of person who didn’t tell you she was dragging you off, in her own words, super top secret training or telling you not to be late and she’d be the one who’s late.
Adorning his FMD, Face mount display(the goggles for those who don’t know), he logged into the world, feeling his conciousness slip from his world into that of The World. Upon arriving in te root town Del Dona in the form of his character Haseo he scanned the area and quickly spotted Alkaid sitting on the rock wall not far from the chaos gate.
He walked over to her side and called out her name, he didn’t receive a response. “Alkaid are you listening” he questioned. He still received no answer. Growing annoyed he drew in his breath and shouted “Alkaid stop daydreaming already!”
This time however he did get a response out of her seeing as how she let out a surprised scream as she lost her balance before falling off the wall. “You idiot! What the hell was that for” she asked as she stood hands on hips looking absolutely furious.
“If you were paying attention I wouldn’t have to yell” Haseo retorted.
“Well maybe I was trying to get my thoughts together!”
“What do you mean get your thoughts together? You told me to come meet you here because you had something important to tell me. You should already have your thoughts together!”
“Well I…Oh just never mind” she said turning away from him, arms crossed and cheeks huffed out.
Okay now he knew something was wrong now. If Alkaid didn’t wish to finish an argument, something had to wrong.
“It’s just…this is hard for me okay” she spoke in a low voice. “Can we go somewhere more…private? We’ve seemed to already caused a scene.” They surveyed the area to see that other players had either stopped to stare or was hiding behind something hoping they won’t be caught in the cross fire of the former terror of death and the former demon palace empress.
They moved from the open area of Del Dona to the home known as Canard. “Now what did you need to tell me that was so important” Haseo asked wanting to get straight to the point.
“Haseo…I’m moving” Alkaid said in a gloom filled voice.
Haseo just stared back looking annoyed “so?”
“Jeez you’re such a insensitive jerk! At least let me finish will ya! Sheesh talk about no manners.” She waited for a response but it never came. She took that as a sigh as either him being intent to listen or she had shut him up. To her it would always be the latter.
“Well like I was saying, I’m moving. Usually that would mean that I’d be logged out for a few days to a week tops. But I’m moving because of that ‘incident.’”
He knew the exact incident she was speaking of. It was when she got PKed and fell comatose.
“My parents want me to leave The World…possibly for good. They said a change of scenery would do me some good.” She turned her gaze to the ground. “So I just wanted to say good bye in case we never see each other again.”
Haseo was absolutely speechless. It was as if he was losing her all over again. He felt all of the emotions from that day flowing through him again. He had to say something. “But that doesn’t mean you have to quit, right? Once they see you’re perfectly fine you’ll be back, right?”
Alkaid forced a weak smiled. She momentarily switched of her mike so he couldn’t hear her cry. Turning her mike back on she turned to face him “you’re making this harder than I want it to be. Haseo this is…good bye.”
Alkaid motioned to leave but was stopped when Haseo grabbed her arm. “Please Alkaid you can’t just leave like this.” It seemed as if he was begging. He pulled her into a tight embrace. “Promise me. Promise me you’ll come back.”
She blushed in his arms as she held her in one world. But in the other she was tearing up and sobbing. She knew she hadn’t turned off her mike but she didn’t care. “I promise Haseo” the words flowed from her lips involuntarily. She didn’t know if they were true. But they both wished they were.
He released her knowing that if they continued any longer the pain of her departing would only hurt that much more. She turned to leave the home when a message appeared on her screen telling her said she had received an item from Haseo.
Checking her inventory she noticed she had one new item. I was a weapon, dual sword at that. But what really caught her attention was a single word in their title. That one word was honeysuckle. She turned back to him briefly “you dork” was the last thing she said. She logged out. How ever to them this log out was different then all the others. This log out felt as if Alkaid had logged off their world as friends or possibly more.
TBC
I know I’m probably going to be laughed at for saying this but writing that nearly made me cry. I also know that im not the best writter and i dont know how many of you have actually played the Trilogy the game play is kinda lame but the story is beautiful. I seriously felt she had died on me again. Well that’s enough mushy stuff. This is the narrator’s part! And remember you have to imagine awesome anime cut scenes tolling by as he talks!
Narrator: Her log out felt like she was pulled from their world once again. Multiple feeling run rampant now that they may now longer see each others face again. Can they live on? And what’s this about a new girl transferring to Ryou’s school? There is just something about her that he can’t put his finger out. Will he never figure out the identity of the girl or shall this girl fill the void in his heart. Tune in to another episode of “Meeting you on the other side!”